by Sweet lig Jul 6, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
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I absolutely love this poem. I know pretty much about friendship with some of my best friends. Great way of explaining it. Good job. 5/5 |
by Adelle
The grammar in this piece needs a lot of work however it’s a very lovely dedication to your friend. |
by Kaila
Its good the message i mean |
by Jenni Marie
I thought this one was sweet. |
I liked the idea of this poem, and how friends should respect them and their friends. I thought the flow was a bit off, and it repeated a lot. The grammar in a lot of places was also very poorly done. You used some wrong tenses in places, and such. Try reading it over again and see if any places make no sense. =) 4/5 xoxo |