Comments : Thank you my friend

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Ummm...could u be my friend.. :-)
    Very nice write you got der and so true..
    Keep yer chin up!
    -singko-

  • 18 years ago

    by DaddysLittlePrincess

    Wow i love this one reminds me of the friendships i have and it is nice to know that your appreciated this is a great one! thanks for the comment on mine

    -Mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    This is inspiring loveed it
    -L

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Pretty good, the lack of capitalization is rather distracting though. The meaning is definitely imporant and well represented. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Amazing poem, I enjoyed it, I thought it flowed rather well great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I liked the idea of this poem, and how friends should respect them and their friends. I thought the flow was a bit off, and it repeated a lot. The grammar in a lot of places was also very poorly done. You used some wrong tenses in places, and such. Try reading it over again and see if any places make no sense. =) 4/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought this one was sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Its good the message i mean
    but not the structure part
    you repeated friend once and it made it sound funny

  • 17 years ago

    by Adelle

    The grammar in this piece needs a lot of work however it’s a very lovely dedication to your friend.

  • I absolutely love this poem. I know pretty much about friendship with some of my best friends. Great way of explaining it. Good job. 5/5

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