by Goran Rahim
Wow, a great poem but sad one. It is all part of life and just like a quote saying "Life happens so deal with it" cause really we can not do anything about where life take us. great poem and i hope everything will be fine with u. |
Really really good poem! lots of emotion! |
by Krisanta
Aww hun im so sorry to hear about this i liked the poem tho it was sad but you are strong and i know you will make it out of this and many more painful days to come, just remeber im here when you need me and dont forget that. i will be praying for you. keep your head up. _krisanta_ |
Very heartfelt and beautiful work. |
Excellent job, Great rhythm to the poem |
I absolutely love this. I really relate to it a lot, and I think you wrote it beautifully. If it is true, Im so sorry that you have to go through it, but know that you aren't the only one whose felt this way.. I hope things get better for you. Just remember to hang in there. |
by Natalie
Wow, hun. That was really sad. I hope you're alright. |
by not a poet
Good writting but the message is a little odd...no one should help you with drugs, he should have helped you off of the drugs....but that is a false presumption! i loved the writting! very to-the-point! |
This was an intense poem. i really liked it. |
Very touching poem---It is unbelievably deep, strong, and emotional. When I finished reading I was just like ''Wow''. It is sooo...I cant even find a word to describe it...I LOVE IT! Great work-Stay Strong no matter what 5/5 |
by Roxy
Wow!! it was very deep but very good sad and very talented you have a wonderful way of wirting what you feel i have this sort of emotion to your poems they make me smile and i don't know why xoxroxyxox |
by Mousie
Wow very powerful and full of emotions... another good write 5/5 |
by Tara Kay
That was awesome, so poerful, sad and ful of emotion. keep writing, you have talent |
This is so sad.. I'm sorry this had to happen to you if it did. I know what true love feels like having someone always by your side... Take care of yourself. |
Very interesting and well written. i liked it coz it was different and you don't read a lot of these around : D well done. |