Forever..I Will Love You (Sunset)

by RadianceInReverse   Jul 6, 2006


As the Sunset hits the horizon
and tears flow down my cheek
I try to say goodbye to you
but my heart is just to weak

Skys blue, full of hope and faith
suns shining, with a dream
as a cloud brings in a feeling so brand new
I realize I'm in love with you

take me off to escape
forever with you, I shall fade
into the night time, into the day
hand in hand we'll run away

laughter brings a smile
and tears bring a frown
but when you're around sadness is never found
happiness and satisfaction is a all around

we, like every couple
have our ups and downs
but one thing will never change
no matter how much we fight and scream

till the end of time
till I no longer cry
up to the very day I die
I will Always love you

I Will love you
with every inch of my heart
I will love you
with every ounce of my flesh
I love you
More than any word could ever express

Forever...I will love you!!!

this isn't my best poem but its about my Bf and it means alot to me.....Joc

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Awwwwwwwwww Jocy! so sweet, too sweet for words. *hugs* You hold a very passionate heart within you, an dthats a great tool for a poet

    keep it up and keep smiling.

    Love yeh
    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Dang..that was good...I loved it...especially the ending...it's very good...one of my favorites...yeah I can't wait to read more....lataz

    Robert.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nick

    Its really sweet, you start to lose your rhythm the further in you get. Still very nice. 1 mistake i found.

    but my heart is just to weak

    Should be 'but my heart is just too weak'

    Apart from that, very good. Hope my feedback helped.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nick

    Its really sweet, you start to lose your rhythm the further in you get. Still very nice. 1 mistake i found.

    but my heart is just to weak

    Should be 'but my heart is just too weak'

    Apart from that, very good. Hope my feedback helped.