by RetroRavey Jul 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I sat and watched him die |
by Crystal Gaze
I thought it was a great peice. |
by katee
I truthfully adored it, |
Donno what to say.... (if you hadnt noticed, im catching up and reading all ur poems, and of course commenting) |
by Kara !
"I could've changed it, |
The line "Just...hoping that he's know" makes no sense. Is it supposed to be like "hoping that he knows"? |