Thats wiked. Really enjoyed it. I liked it how u made cutting sound like such a beautiful art form even though its something done in Love you to vote and comment on any of mine.such hurt and pain. Take care 5\5.

Not really as strong as it could have been. There was some flaws with the flow and some of the words chosen kinda contributed to that. Overall it was an okay job not really wowing except it did have some cool lines like:

"Eyes left staring to oblivion of emptiness"

Which was rather one of those that really stood out.
~Faith-less