Wow great piece of poetry. the element of gruesome sadness is portrayed brilliantly. very nice. keep it up.

Wow... There is beauty in your sadness...you have expressed your emotions very well.

Excellent words..

odtober xx

I really like that its really beautiful better then mine but check them out anyway> 5/5
vsams

Hey This is one beautiful poem u have written..Keep writing. Best luck!

Agh.
this is a verygood poem.
i like it a lot.
it makes me wish i could write a good poem. :]
have a nice day

Agh.
this is a verygood poem.
i like it a lot.
it makes me wish i could write a good poem. :]
have a nice day

Smile, wonnder poem,I truely admire your work.5/5

I really like this poem, a lot it's great! keep it up check out my poems, thanx.!!

I really like this poem, a lot it's great! keep it up check out my poems, thanx.!!

I really like this poem, a lot it's great! keep it up check out my poems, thanx.!!

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

I really loved your poem. you could just feel the pain ad depression while you were reading it.

Hey no new poems for awhile, where you at? gone and fell of the face of the planet.

Wow!! you write from your heart and as if you have gone through a heartbreak and it relates to you.. very touching and emotional. ... and at the same time cute....
love it ..

Very emotional, I know where your coming from, I think. The way you right your poems....its amazing! I really wish I could write like you do :D

Awesome poem. I loved every last word.

Thankyou for your comments.

Star

You got a nice way with words there. it was a great poem. it made me cry. jk.comment my poem, i made a new one.

Sonic

Hey, I haven't checked your poems in ages. this is a shockingly great poem! One of your best.
5/5