Wow that was extremely visual and therefore haunting. The fact that this comes straight for the heart, or i assume anyway with such strong words of pain and misery, makes me so sad. I just want to hold you, make thigns better. That's pretty selfish i guess.
I want you to know i'm always here for you,..hope to talk to you soon i miss u:(
xoxoxoxox

Really good :)

Amsolutly fantastic. The imagery is amazung and you can really feel the pain in this poem....
I LOVE IT

xxxxx

Excellent...!
I loved it...well expressed
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O SIS!!! THIS WAS WRITTEN SOOOO EXTREMLY WELL!! AMAMZING!! IT JUST -KILLS- ME BC...I NO WHO THIS POEM IS ABOUT: A -BEAUTIFUL- && PERFECT GRIL!!...MY SISTER!!
U R SO THIN! SO PERFECT! IM SO SRY...U R IN PAIN!!!!!!!
I LOVE U!!

Awww hunni, stop doin this to urself u are so beautiful jus the way you are! you need to eat baby, if you need to talk i'm always here! love you tons! -hayley

Wow..its deep darl..been a while..&& yet You are still a great great great poet!!!

love -angel-

Aww hunni, never give up hope. I know easier said than done but I want you to be strong for yourself. I don't like to see you suffering. Luv ya - talk anytime if you like :)

Wow-the imagery in this is amazing!! I could totally picture the looks people give and the way the girl looks too. I got captivated by it once I started reading. Really sad,,,Great job---5/5

Love this poem ... check out mine xxxx