Im more than that

by WeT^TiSSue   Jul 6, 2006


What more could you want?
You said you don't like people that screw you over
I was nothing but upfront
I thought you were my lover

All i was to you was your emotional tampon
how dare you lead me on!!!
Your the coldest person i know
so why cant i let go?

I hate you,i really do!
But it doesn't affect you
CAN YOU SEE WHAT YOU'RE PUTTING ME THROUGH?
I despise you

I lost touch with myself and you were my reality.
what is gonna happen now to me?
Now that my "thruth" was also fallacy?

The truth is that i feel empty now.
How do i get out of this?
i dont know how...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow!! it sshows how u care for someone but then hated them becasu ethey never ever out u first
    xoxroxyox great!!

  • 18 years ago

    by sweetangel13

    Hey your poem is great

  • 18 years ago

    by jenna grace

    Nice... structure is all that needs work. other than that, bravo!!! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    Interesting style you have here. I think try and work on a little more structure. Otherwise, your words cut like a knife into the heart of your reader... they can actually feel the emotion you portray in this piece. Nice work!!

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Ice Bouquet

    I found it a little raw. But understood the message thats for sure. (dont like the tampon mention!)

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