I found it a little raw. But understood the message thats for sure. (dont like the tampon mention!)

Interesting style you have here. I think try and work on a little more structure. Otherwise, your words cut like a knife into the heart of your reader... they can actually feel the emotion you portray in this piece. Nice work!!

Samantha

Nice... structure is all that needs work. other than that, bravo!!! =)

Hey your poem is great

Wow!! it sshows how u care for someone but then hated them becasu ethey never ever out u first
xoxroxyox great!!