Hey it is like mine. lol. i didn't copy though (shifty eyes). lol. really good. keep writing dude.
Brian W

P.S. by teh way, suz told me u thought i was her. LOL. don't worry, i gte that a lot. i'm very feminine. lol

-When all of your wishes are granted, many of your dreams, will be destroyed

Mm-hmm. a really great poem. it flows well and has a clear meaning, unlike a few of ur other poems which i truly can't understand. lol. good job. rock on : )
-Suzie