Please Just Let Me Write!(Trapped Within the Alphabet part 2)

by Unforgiven Retniap doolb   Jul 6, 2006


*Just a quick write.

I want to write,
write and finally let go,
want free verse with no rhymes,
where my emotions can finally flow.

But even now rhyme spills within,
and stanzas I want to organize,
rhyme once rhyme twice,
so jumble of words don't hurt your eyes.

Also what if people don't like it,
and yes I care about that,
what if they hate it,
will they just turn their back?

So bad I want to write freely,
but too scared to turn it all around,
I want to love my poetry again,
Love that has been lost,
and not yet found.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Great job! I like how you just needed to write something ;; it`s a good way to resolve things, isn`t it? I sure think so.
    Your rhyming was really good, not so common things! Loved the second stanza.
    The flow was also really good throughout the poem - this appears to be a sequal - I`ve still got two more of your poems to go, so, I`ll go do that one, for sure. =D
    Overall, great job honey. You`re a great writer, please, keep this up. =D
    5/5

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    I Think Your Free Writing Would Be Just As Beautiful As The Writing You Spend Time Editing, Because True Talent Shines Through Regardless, And I've Found That In You...Good Job On This & I Look Forward To Reading More 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    I Really Like This Poem. Maybe Because I Can Relate With It So Well. I Always Feel As Though Someone Won't Appreciate My Poetry Or Dislike It. But, Then Again, As Long As Your Poetry Comes Straight From The Heart, No One Can Tell You That It's A Bad Poem.

    -Darrin

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