I Really Like This Poem. Maybe Because I Can Relate With It So Well. I Always Feel As Though Someone Won't Appreciate My Poetry Or Dislike It. But, Then Again, As Long As Your Poetry Comes Straight From The Heart, No One Can Tell You That It's A Bad Poem.

-Darrin

I Think Your Free Writing Would Be Just As Beautiful As The Writing You Spend Time Editing, Because True Talent Shines Through Regardless, And I've Found That In You...Good Job On This & I Look Forward To Reading More 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Great job! I like how you just needed to write something ;; it`s a good way to resolve things, isn`t it? I sure think so.
Your rhyming was really good, not so common things! Loved the second stanza.
The flow was also really good throughout the poem - this appears to be a sequal - I`ve still got two more of your poems to go, so, I`ll go do that one, for sure. =D
Overall, great job honey. You`re a great writer, please, keep this up. =D
5/5

Samantha Hollywood