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Very well done. I really liked it. There seems to be more that can be said at the end, though, it's only a suggestion. Keep writing

This was a pretty good poem, but I thought the adjectives you used were weak.

"And so mean it's almost scary"
[mean? I think you could find a better word]

"You're voice which used to calm me
Now brings fear upon my heart
It sounds so cold and harsh"
['calm', 'cold', 'harsh' all of these words are so basic. You need to broaden your vocabulary.]

I was getting sick of the basic words. I mean, I use them too, but I am trying to learn new things. I think you should too. You have a lot of potential, and I would like to see what you can do with it. Keep on writing, you will get a lot better if you try.

I love in this poem how each stanza starts with ''your...'' and then there's something about the person. Its very unique! The only errors are that some of the first lines of the stanzas have ''you're'' not ''your''. All and all amazing poem! 5/5

Wow, i really liked this poem, it was kinda dark but very well written. Great work.

--Steph

Second and fourth stanzas, first word should be "Your" and not "You're".

The third stanza doesn't rhyme or almost-rhyme like the others do.

This poem is very true, as in it portrays a very true emotion/experience in a very true way. It's believable, anyone that's been in that position can agree with it. Great job.