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by Gothic Princess Jul 6, 2006 category : Nature, environment / nature
Moon and stars allure and shine like glitter Night takes over me And brings me closer to my sanity Moon and stars I see, feel, breathe, touch and taste Moon so bright and beautiful Stars so bright Like drops of liquid glitter
by Darien
Still not a Haiku. But a good poem.
I think you should take out the spaces between the lines. It was meant to flow, and that takes away from the flow, but I liked the imagery you brought in. Good stuff.
