Mud * haiku*

by Gothic Princess   Jul 6, 2006


Tears from blue eyes fall to earth

Mud forms, tears of human misery fall

From sheer hopelessness

Mid, so dark and damp

Covers my pale skin

My tears like ice upon my cheeks

Mud, beautiful, dirty

Full of misery

And a sad truth

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Hmmm, well done. i like that you used mud in a poem. so very different.

    5/5 David

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    This is not a Haiku.
    But yes, it was indeed interesting.

  • 18 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Interesting poem, but I don't think it's a haiku

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