by nikki Jul 6, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The crack of lightening, |
Wow great job of turning the poem into something more than just observing nature that made it really unique and memorable b/c not many people do that |
by Chris
I love it very well written I love the theme |
by LadyPearl
Excellent first stanza. I think you can make it better by rewriting the last two stanza so it's just "nature" |
by TheSickness
I enjoyed reading this one |
Nikki -- |