That is sad...and that is very good....5/5

Hey darl a very touching piece. very well written. thank u for ur comment on my poem. meant alot xx

I like it

A good poem I know how that feel as far a the structer and rhyme schems goes i loved the rhyme but i would love to see is seprated into verses

I really like how you ended this it flows really well.

Hey great poem. i really liked it. nice choice of words and flow. keep it up
dee

Dont u hate when people do that great poem 5/5

Hey i rele liked this poem it was sad tho but i liked it...

Interesting poem... it was inspiring!