FiRST GLANCES ;;

by NewAccount   Jul 6, 2006


YOU TAKE A GLANCE AT ME ;;
TELL ME NOW, WHAT DO YOU SEE?

CAN YOU SEE ALL THOSE SCARS UPON MY WRiST?
HOW HiS NAME iS SPELT WiTH EACH PERFECT SLiT?

CAN YOU SEE HOW BADLY MY HEART iS BROKEN?
HOW i WiSH ALL WORDS WERE LEFT UNSPOKEN?

CAN YOU SEE HOW THiS KNiFE iS MY ONLY FRiEND?
EACH MEETiNG BRiNGiNG ME CLOSER TO THE END.

CAN YOU SEE HOW BADLY HE LEFT ME TORN?
HOW MY HEART iS BROKEN AND BADLY WORN?

CAN YOU SEE HOW MUCH i CRY AT NiGHT?
HOW MUCH i WANT TO MAKE EVERYTHiNG RiGHT?

OR DO YOU SEE A HAPPY GiRL?
CAN YOU SEE THE PAiN BEHiND THE CURL?

MAYBE YOU PASS NOT KNOWiNG MY SMiLE\'S A FAKE ;;
HOW THiS LiFE iS MORE THAN MY LiTTLE HEART CAN TAKE.

ALL THEY SEE iS A GiRL WHO LiKES TO PRETEND ;;
THEY DON\'T KNOW TONiGHT i\'LL MEET MY END.

FiRST GLANCES WON\'T TELL YOU EVERYTHiNG ;;
&& MiNE OF COURSE WON\'T SAYY A THiNG.

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