Mountains

by XXTruthSeekerXX   Jul 6, 2006


Melting away illusions of the sky
Overlooking valley's gaping jaw
Uncovering what natural beauty drank
Naked land imprinted in my shadow paw
Thriving among a slithering riverbank
Assurance to life upon my tilting ground
Indulgent Green emerging from seeds
Nurtured among the ancient without sound
Solitary Mountains vast in evergreens

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Good job expressing your love. Keep writing.

    Nazeer

  • 17 years ago

    by StormyStar

    I like yours as well.

    and yess that one poem of mine, is true..

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Nice imaginery, ur a good writer keep on writing all what u like and feel.. god bless

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    I definatley loved your use of personification in this piece! That was my favorite part of English so this poem really made me smile and enjoy it!!! Man mountains..thats a place to go!
    Loved this poem!! Would appreciate if you read "what would your letter say?"

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Very nice, very nice. Excellent job Noni. Another beauty.5/5

    Ravyn

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