Very nice, very nice. Excellent job Noni. Another beauty.5/5

Ravyn

I definatley loved your use of personification in this piece! That was my favorite part of English so this poem really made me smile and enjoy it!!! Man mountains..thats a place to go!
Loved this poem!! Would appreciate if you read "what would your letter say?"

Nice imaginery, ur a good writer keep on writing all what u like and feel.. god bless

I like yours as well.

and yess that one poem of mine, is true..

Good job expressing your love. Keep writing.

Nazeer