by Arcane Blondie Jul 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Nature was her life, |
by Jackie Marie
What I love most about it is that it tells a story. I love when poems do that. Excellent job. I love it. 5/5. |
by not a poet
I really like this one alot! my only sugestion would be to put a little more imagery...like the sound of the birds flying or something to that effect! great once again! |
by Shaylee
Darl this was a very good piece. It is filled with so much emotion. it definalty stirred my emotions! It is so sad, and i realy wanted to reach aout and help her. you brought to a very beautifuly sad ending. keep up the great work |
by Natalie
This made me cry. |
by Heather
Wow... just wow. |