Wow... just wow.
After I read it I was pretty much left speachless.
I loved the way you wrote it.
Keep up the good work!

This made me cry.

It was really good. I hope you know that. It was filled with SO much emotion. If this is the slightest part about you, and you need someone to talk to. I'm here.

I'm still in wow mode. This was excellent. Omg! I wouldn't change anything! It's perfect the way it is. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Darl this was a very good piece. It is filled with so much emotion. it definalty stirred my emotions! It is so sad, and i realy wanted to reach aout and help her. you brought to a very beautifuly sad ending. keep up the great work

I really like this one alot! my only sugestion would be to put a little more imagery...like the sound of the birds flying or something to that effect! great once again!
keep it up!

What I love most about it is that it tells a story. I love when poems do that. Excellent job. I love it. 5/5.
I do have to say, it was very sad but well written. Keep it up.

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