I really really like this one!

Tony... this is very short.. but it says extremely alot... and with my background i can totally relate to what ur trying to say.. it doesnt take alot to say what u feel.. good job.. keep writeing coz u will be rewarded for that..

INCREADABLY GOOD...
with all the love in the world..
MissM. (marla)

This is so short but it tells so much!Great job...not many writers can do this!Awsome!Take a look at mine if you want...I know pain...so do you...we could relate...I dunno...soryy....bye

I gave u 5/5

I love this sooo much. It's so simple, but nearly everyone who's not still pretending they are perfect can relate.

I like alot of your stuff and hope to read more from you soon :)

Simply beautiful in a tragic way (i feel the same way.)

I love this poem. its short but its like it tells a story in few words.

thank you so much for the comment on my poem. It meant a lot to me and made me feel better about myself.

Loved it