A Different Love

by Mousie   Jul 7, 2006


I say we never loved each other
As true as love can be.
It might not have been truer than true
But it was a love to me.

That month you were gone
Was the hardest month of the year,
My heart couldn't ache anymore
I think that's what I feared.

So many memories we made
Ones I am sure to never forget
Ones I continue to look back at
Ones that I will never regret.

Many months later
After heartbreak and pain
I still look back on those memories
And smile in my soul's rain.

You made me happy
Strong confident and caring,
You helped mold me
My personality blaring.

For giving me strength
I will always thank you.
For teaching me a different love
I will always be thankful.

wow i came up with this really fast! i barely even paused! this all needed to come out, and it was all the truth. enjoy

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  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    It's great that as you say you came up with this poem really fast it's just that it kind of shows that you didnt put as much time into it. but thats fine, the poem still expressed all that you wanted it to express...all that and more...Nice write=)

  • 18 years ago

    by Shawna

    This is really sweet!! The best poetry is what just comes out, not when it's forced!! I especially loved the part ' It might not have been truer than true, but it was a love to me!'

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Firstly good job, but i don't think for one you can be "truer than true". Secondly, you lost your rhyming scheme in your last stanza which threw things off a bit, and thirdly i think you could improve your language, like the lines:
    "I still look back on those memories
    And smile in my soul's rain"
    Which were very nicely put together. Keep working on your writing and best of luck.

  • 18 years ago

    by gemowski

    This a really good piece of work easy to relate to. im just gettin ova a situation like this.

    great work i gave you 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    Wow...I'm not really a fan of love poems becasue most of them are well poorly written but this one was amazing...I loved it.

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