Love it darling...'cept it's about him. BLECH.

ilu. joy.

Awesome, total bliss it was really good! I enjoyed it a lot!

Please r/r/c two other poems of mine
-thanks-ann

Second line... as "true" as love can be?
Last stanza, you use "thank you" and "thankful". A little repetitive. A different word could probably be used for one of the two.
Great poem though, it's very heartfelt and meaningful, I can tell.

I love this poem! And it is really good for it being written without pausing or anything---! The flow is flawlees except for what Melissa S. Masucci said. The thing about ''thank you'' and ''thankful''-that made it a little disjointed---Overall, Great write! 5/5 Keep it up!

Ok, I loved this poem! And I can definitely relate alot to it..I love your rhythm...the flow is great, it shows really great emotion! you're a great poet!

Lol, it's really really good! like, woah! really good!. beautiful poem. and i hope everything goes good for u with the crush on ur guy friend. i really do.

Hey.. i just loved this.. the rhyme was amazing, and ur flow was almost perfect.. ( i just think u shud add "just" after "But it" in the last line of the first stanza to even out the syllable count)
loved the emotion, the non-bitter feelings and words that expressed all that needed to be said
o btw, wats "truse"?? did u mean true? im so confused today :P excuse the airheadedness.. lol

anyway, i just reli loved this, and i think it was sincere and calm and not regretful, which i reli appreciate in breakups.. (does that make any sense?)

i hope ur OK now..
keep it ups, ur gr8
take good care
NannO

Mousie --
The rhyming and theme was kind of vague in this, but overall, it was pretty good. Again, the flow was really nice. Good job

Samantha Hollywood

Indeed an emotional piece that came straight from your heart. Good write. 5/5

Nicely fitted together. Spontaneous poems are usually some of the best to write, or mean most to the poet. Good job.

As always~ Kate

Wow this is really really good
you write alot of great poems
this is very true feelings for alot of people
great job
5/5

God Bless

-chris

Wow...I'm not really a fan of love poems becasue most of them are well poorly written but this one was amazing...I loved it.

This a really good piece of work easy to relate to. im just gettin ova a situation like this.

great work i gave you 5/5

Firstly good job, but i don't think for one you can be "truer than true". Secondly, you lost your rhyming scheme in your last stanza which threw things off a bit, and thirdly i think you could improve your language, like the lines:
"I still look back on those memories
And smile in my soul's rain"
Which were very nicely put together. Keep working on your writing and best of luck.

This is really sweet!! The best poetry is what just comes out, not when it's forced!! I especially loved the part ' It might not have been truer than true, but it was a love to me!'

It's great that as you say you came up with this poem really fast it's just that it kind of shows that you didnt put as much time into it. but thats fine, the poem still expressed all that you wanted it to express...all that and more...Nice write=)