Great work, as i said earlier. THis rhymes incrediably well and was a very VERY hard type of poem to write. I've read a lot of friendship poems, but this is surely one of the best, because it is detailed in the right ways and very original. You are a very talented poet. Keep it up!

This is a great poem. I liked it 5/5.
~Kyra~

I really like this one. Its a good change from the sad poems. (not that there bad lol)
ANd i loved this verse
Two different lives with secrets hidden,
And only one key to open the door.
Mouths closed shut because no one would listen,
To the fears in our cries when they would soar.

its worded great

keep it up

God Bless

_Chris

PS
5/5 lol

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

I liked it

good job

Oh my...This actually made my eyes water. You are such a good writer, you don't even know how much your poems have touched others. This is almost exactly what happened with my friends and us at the end of the year. It was grad for us. Anyways...love the poem overall. 5/5 Good job! And you and I have a lot in common as I see lol. xoxo

¤ Samantha ¤