by *Sweet as your worst nightmare* Jul 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I'm sorry, |
by Biscuit
A bit patchy, the flow is not so good, its a tad too broken up, i think it would eb better if some of the lines were put together so they're longer. also the spacing thing again... |
by Tara Kay
Another good poem, No is a very strong word, which you showed here, well done |
I like this.. It's different and has an interesting flow to it.. |