Wow....matthew...you've written some good love poems about people but this one tops it all...although in the second stanza put "her" it's missing it...but other than that...the poem is flawless...yeah need to write more....well lataz |
Oh wow Matt this poem is beautiful...and im so glad that you found that special girl...she is very lucky to have you....Beautiful..thats all i can say...Miss ya Luv ya Joclyn |