Only you

by paddy   Feb 27, 2004


Deep in my soul
my love
there's only you
your every breath i take
your eyes tell me
how much you love
I'll hold you close to my heart
my heart is yours
hold it in your palms
choose where to place it
wrap your arms around me
take me
I'm yours

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  • 20 years ago

    by craig

    Another great poem Lorna. Another 5 to you. love the way you use so few words, just enough for the reader to know that you are totaly besotted with the subject of this piece, totaly surrendered to him. `deep in my soul` says to me that every firbre of your being, `every breath...` , every thought you have revolves around this person. thanks for the kind coments you made on `cold bed` i wrote it after reading a few of your poems. you influenced me to try and use as few words a possible, every line and phrase is significant, no wasted words. thanks you for that. also
    love the cute way you write
    your comments in
    the same
    style
    as your poetry
    very
    unique!
    just added you to fav list