Another great poem Lorna. Another 5 to you. love the way you use so few words, just enough for the reader to know that you are totaly besotted with the subject of this piece, totaly surrendered to him. `deep in my soul` says to me that every firbre of your being, `every breath...` , every thought you have revolves around this person. thanks for the kind coments you made on `cold bed` i wrote it after reading a few of your poems. you influenced me to try and use as few words a possible, every line and phrase is significant, no wasted words. thanks you for that. also
love the cute way you write
your comments in
the same
style
as your poetry
very
unique!
just added you to fav list