Thank-you so much for taking the time to read my poem. i really appreciated the spelling help as well as the whole making "i" capital, i wrote that off the top of my head and i should have proof read it. thank you!
as fr your work...
great! i loved this one alot! you felt real pain when reading it...maybe try to use some stronger words...such as "You'll see me" could maybe be stronger with "You'll invision me in your heart..." or something like that. great job
keep it up!

How true. Sometimes we can seem like meat in a meat market. It is like we raise our hand and wait to be recognized but in reality our hand was never listed up. Sometimes we have to be selfish otherwise we can get left behind and not chosen.

This was beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading this. Sometimes I wonder what my life would be like without my boyfriend, and I just can't imagine! And sometimes it feels as though we have to wait whether our partners decision to stay or leave. It can be stressing sometimes. Great poem. 5/5

Wow-this poem is filled with so much emotion-you expressed how you feel so well! My favorite stanza is:

''And so here I am
miserable without you
waiting for your word, a decision
that will make or break''

Amazing write! 5/5

I love this, i can relate a lot to this, and this part

Hoping selfishly that
when push comes to shove
you'll see me, see how much
I truly love you.

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It's soo weird b/c i said those exact words to my ex..but yeah i loved this poem it was very well written!!

There is a stark realism to all of your work that I have read so far
I find it truly amazing.

Beautifully written!

Wow, that was so powerful and full of emotion, great work, it was usch an amasing poem. You are extremely talented, i loved it.

--Steph

That was really sweet, pleading, and emotional... i liked it... i don't always rhyme my poems either, and sometimes i convey the message a little better if i dont... great flow! nice job

Very well written. And when push comes to shove, I still love you. XOXO

I think it is a very nice poem deep meaning and you made your point.
I really like the way you wrote it.
5/5

That was beautiful!!lots of meaning,which always makes it good :D keep it up!!
--lexie

Wow this is so sweet. I can really see the emotion in it, and it really seems to come from your heart. Well done 5/5