Wow...that's sad. :( but i do love your poems. they're my fave. you sould publish them.

This was beautiful...did this happen to someone you knew?? iv had this feeling but never killed myself because of it!

your an amazing writer!

Great job with the flow and the emotion. The topic was simple enough.

I really liked this poem too, i had to re-read it to completely understand it but that's because im a little slow lol. wonderful poem. 10/5 =D lol 5/5.
With Love,
~*Katherine*~