O...k... lol. very very interesting. kinda chilling and it really draws u in : ) love it
Your friend, Suzie

Awsome! I love it, it kinda got my attention on some parts. I love your writes! Their awsome, and I respect your skills. I'm still not as good as you,..but I try, lmfao. And like your profile said, it means something to you, and that's all that matters. True. I know my poems mean something to me, and obviously others too. So I can tell you ya got a bonus, cause I can relate ( Realate? I don't know) to some of your poems. And some of them just kill me, their so good. So I'll tell ya right now, you deserve a 5.0 and higher here! Some people just don't know how good you are, so I have a guess that you'll somehow, sometime in life, publish something on a higher level than a website! So good luck! 5/5

Hmmm....I guess there's something that draws the reader in but at the same time something's missing. Not exactly like awesome or astonishing but still some really interesting word play that worked with the flow. Some really great imagery. But well not really great. There were some cool lines and the last stanza stood out far more than the others.
~Faith-less

I & h e a r t s ; this

I love that whole 'God' thing. True Dat homes.