Wow...very nice....happy that you finished it even though you fell asleep talking to me the other night....but its ok....nice job and write more...lay

matt

Good poem. i like how you repeated the first verse or w/e u call it again in the ending. it gives the poem an echo. loved it
~cherry

Wow...i love all ur poems

this is a good one too..

i understand wat ur gettin at...

loverly hun

xxx

Great Poem Robert although there were a few parts and that kinda through off the flow..but besides that it was very well written...Miss Ya Luv Ya..Joclyn

Aww......

Ii LiiKE DiiS ONE ... N ii ASK THAT ONE PERSON DA SAME QUESTiiONS .. ALL THE TiiME ....

Hey really good poem um that poem was for a girl i liked for a while but i she doesnt like me no more but i got a gril friend and i made Your Exquisite for her you should read it...

Hey this is really really good. nice work. ur song potatoes on valentines day is really good 2 xoxo -jennifer

Amazing poem. It's something everyone can relate to. Everyone has had this on their mind about someone at least once. I can really feel your poem. good work!

Oh...wow...this was deep, but good. Just so you know, I would care, hun. :)

Nice peom. It made me want to cry. But all and all nicely done

L O V E L Y