5\5 i liked it a lot. i really liked the bit at the end i didnt realise it was about urself. I related to every single word. Take care. Love you to comment on any of mine.

Hey how is it going... u commented on my poem and i really appreciated it.. ures is really good i hell understood it.. we seem to have the same style.. thanx agen for taking the ime to read mine and take it easy xox

Whoa.. i just hope you don't really hate yourself that much! come on, everybody is special in their own way, you just need to know which way you belong. and if this is imagination, then good work because you really make it feel real. nevertheless, great work.