Comments : Painting my Today

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris

    I reallly like it.
    Its original and You have a cool style to your writing.
    Keep it up. 5/5

    -chris

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Wow. This is very mint. Lovely style of writing. Excellent. 5.

    Xx.Nothing-Gold-Can-Stay.xX

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Wow! I loved the lines " The butterfly fluttering in your chest " and " I turned the page: Between my fingers it crumbles into a soft and smoldering ash ". REALLY amazing...keep it up. 5/5
    ~Jules