Comments : The Last to Fall

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Chels this reminded me of 9/11 and how those poor ppl lost their lives trying to escape a their life threatening horror. This poem made my eyes well up with tears...jus imaging this was true made me empathize. Another spectacular write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    Chels this poem was AMAZING! I mean, that doesn't even describe it! I loved it, fabulous, lvoely, beautiful...I loved it. Wonderful job, it was so great...one of you best. Excellent. You wrote about it as if it happened to your family...it was beautiful, if I could rate above a 5 I would.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Chelsey this piece also reminded me of 9-11 and the poem I wrote" In The Arms Of The Angels "
    The father of Christine Lee Hanson made one last phone call to his parents .
    Although he wasn't as fortunate to make it out alive.

    The was such a heart touching poem Chelsey and really makes you think, how precious life really is and that we should always take a few seconds out to tell our loved ones we love them at the beginning of each and every day .

    Love ya A.I.D....... Look now you've made me all mushy...Geez girl .