Red Tears Flow

by X~Angie~X   Jul 7, 2006


Rushing out blood from my body
Expressing the hurt in my own way
Depression hit like a ton of bricks

Tissues covering the flow of blood
Everyday I cry and wish I could die
Arms hurting from the crimson flow
Reasons to cut and see all the blood
Screaming inside from all the pain

Fears flow just like the rain
Losing control when I use the knife
Outwards the blood keeps gushing
Wondering if I will ever end this painful life

the beginning of each of the lines are capitalized and they spell out the title.. hope you like it

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  • 18 years ago

    by forgetmenot

    I rele liked this!!! its emotional and i can rele relate 2 it-its weird coz i feel almost exactly like that!! keep it up hun!

    lizzie
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    Beautiful...I can relate to it so well!

    Stay stong and Im here to talk whenever you need to.

    ~Miss Poetic~

  • 18 years ago

    by ENTROPY

    Hey, thanks for the comment. i love this poem, especially "tears flow just like rain" verrryy good. love and luck
    mollyjade

  • 18 years ago

    by Jemma

    Hey
    It's a great piece of poetry. I liek that you don't rely on rhyme and the point is made and expressed very well. The title being spelled out is clever and the lines don't seem forced which was why i didn't notice it until it was mentioned. Well done.

    Jemma

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey great poem!, i love the way u did that letter thing!
    great job love mel

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