by SeVi 26 Jul 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
He sits still looking in her eyes, |
That was good...i liked it alot...u couldve been a little more descriptive but other than that it wasa awesome. |
by Courtney
Very nice! I really like how much you spaced it - it was easy to read. =) Awesome ending, keep up the good work. |