Comments : My safe place

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Honestly, i loved this piecec of work, i feel no need for imporvements. it was beautifully written, and i can tell it came from your heart and that's all that matters.

    by putting me down you feel some kind of power
    my happiness is what you aim to devour

    those were my favorite lines. your a wonderful writer, keep up the nice work. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.