What a great message! Just... wow. I have nothing bad to say about this, it rocks :) |
Lexie - |
I Liked The Message Alot Because It Was a Bland Poem Like I See Alot Of Other Poets Write....It Had Meaning And Quite Creativly Put 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
I Don't Know Why I Cant Comment On "Farewell from gate four" My Computers Stupid But I Voted For It...And Anyone Reading My Comment...Trust Me If You Liked This Poem As Much As I Did The "Farewell From Gate Four" Is Just As Awesome Check It Out Its Worth The 5.0 xoxo-Nikk |
by Darien
Wow, this should go under the sad section. Perfume has such a 'strong' effect on people. I am usually dazzled when my girlfriend puts on her perfume. It reminds me of her. It's as if she was there with me. This poem, brought out the bad in perfume. Bringing home an abusive man. I am guessing you are speaking about your mom. It's hard being a single parent, give her the support she needs and deserves. Take care and good luck. |
by Nelle
Wow! i loved this poem! it was very creative it was full of emotions and pain..you have a great way of expressing yourself! you did it beautifully! definitely 5/5 |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Hmm. Wow. |