Very good poem

time

Hey great poem. im actually going through the same sort of ordeal so i know how it is. im sure alotta other people can relate too. very well written by the way. keep it up
dee

Very good poem. I know what you are feeling. Keep up the good writing

Hey i thinks great you dont need to change a thing or do anything too it.i loved it

Your the shit..... i feel the lines you write and the imagery that you see .... keep it up

Nice poem
i liked it lots

Beautiful. i felt as if i was you when i was reading this. good write!

I think its real good it reminds me of how i felt when i was with a guy.

I know how you feel...I'm going through the same deal.

--Sell