Wow this is really good. I like that supernatural kind of thing....but if something like that happened to me i would be freaked out lol I stick to reading about that stuff in books :) Great job though.

Very interesting poem (and concept, you must have a very interesting life). Written very well, my biggest complaint would be lack of consistency in writing style. I like it though.

I'm confused about the structure. The first two stanzas are prose, the third gains some rhyme, I see some rhythm in the forth stanza, but final stanzas lose the flow again.

"As, for these spirits they are whom I will bow"

The comma after "As" shouldn't be there, and I think it should be "they are 'FOR' whom I will bow". It doesn't make sense otherwise.

Besides that though, it was definately an original piece. I've never read anything like it. It does make a very good story. And I can see you are truely creeped out by this 'gift'.
You certainly have potential to become a great poet. x

Wow! That's pretty cool. Is this really true? Geez, I'd prob love it if it happened to me. Tehe. I thought you did a great job at expressing how you're feeling about all this. You really put your emotions out there for people to understand what it would feel like. Keep it up!! 5/5

`Talee. xx.

Hmmmm....thats creepy. That would scare me too. As for the poem!-very dark. I got the chills----great write 5/5

Yah i believe you completly...most people have this "gift" but everyone is afraid of it, or dosent want to find it. it is good though, not bad, i am a gnostic/Pegan so the whole basis is to really use what our "god" gave us, an internal instinct.
loved this one alott!