Begining or end (choices)

by evan   Jul 8, 2006


My glass is half empty and inside I'm crying
I want to keep living but feel like I'm dying
why not change me to make me great?
talk to me so my feelings wont break
communication is this the missing link?
help me understand the way you think
the way your mind works

Make your decision but make it your last
and if your decision puts us in the past
i wont cry, i won't be sad
instead ill be happy
for what we once had

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  • 18 years ago

    by Not just a metaphorical genius

    Good job Evan, keep it up, and never stop telling her how you feel.

  • 18 years ago

    by amy

    Wow your a really good poem writer! i love it! you should keep on writing!! from Amy!!

  • 18 years ago

    by struggling

    Wow get poem i really ke it ookin orward treadin more from you.5/5 god poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    This was AMAZZZING...the rhyme was excellent and the feelings were so there it was liek I was inside your head...Keep it up you're good.

    Lissa

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