Very nice images emma, my girl. very nice read also. I did so enjoy reading this as i would enjoy listening to placebo 36 degrees (a lot) Lol.
love ya, friendly. : )
-Suzie

Very strongly written poem. I loved the whole poem... It's really good!

Wow, this was just a powerful write. I liked the rhymes and the style you used. There was indeed a sort of dark element to this poem. The images definitely gave it a good boost. Really good work.

Awesome poem! It is really original! The flow was awesome.....and it was really descriptive!! Great job, kudos to you!

Please r/r/c rose colored glasses and foriegner!
-thanks-

Enjoyed it quite immensely. Thought that the words gave it an effective use of imagery and verbs that gave this a clear picture that had a smooth flow. An excellent write and really...well...did have great usage of words. Wonderful.
~Faith-less

WOW!!! Definitely great, and very very powerful..it was just..well, great! the rhythm was good...it was very well written!

'Curling round the ripples,
In a textured ribbon paint,'

These two lines were my favorite. You defintely have a way with words, and expressing certain things. I really liked this poem. Great Job.

The creative discription is what really made this poem...in my mind. the rhymes were so well connected.

Brad

Very unique poem! I really enjoyed reading it-the descriptions are great- I love how you ended the poem too! 5/5 Keep it up--

I love your language in all your poems, its very descriptive and well used. A great job, well ended and uniquely crafted. Great work!

The whole poem was very strong, up until the ending line. It was still a very powerful line, but I guess it was just not what I had predicted for an ending to this poem. It was still very well written. You have such a creative imagination. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.