Comments : Suicide Twice

  • 18 years ago

    by Jade Eyes

    I liked it a lot....would u plz read sum of my poems and let me no wat u think....keep writing..
    INKS

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrew Dorsey

    Once again. a very good poem. I like this one alot. If I had to pick one of your poems I would concider my fav. This one would def. be it

  • 18 years ago

    by ãêx

    Omg I love this poem.
    I've done both
    But someone always seems to find me lol
    But I've sort of changed about that
    And I hope you never do anything like that
    If you ever need anyone to talk to
    I am here

    Peace-Alex

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh

    Yah thanks for the comment on my poem.....and i like ur pomes...the express feelings..and thats wut my poetry is usually about..i express how i feel...i give u a 5 on this poem...

  • 18 years ago

    by lil D

    Nice most of mine poemz are like thiz idk y but i L0V3 TH1Z P30M u 1NSP1R3D me lol nd i pictured it so
    perfect lol like in
    my mind well buh by3 mucho amor

    ~~lil D~~ ~~DarkAngel~~

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥?♥

    WOW I LUV3D IT..
    K33P DOIN YO THANG

  • 18 years ago

    by tony

    This one is really good i luved itbut a few rhymes werent so good so 4

  • This makes me cry love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Cameron

    That is the most amazing sucide poem i ever had you inspire me in so many ways you just don't know that is why you are on my favorite list. You are good and you don't even realze how good you are.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    Oh, that was amazing.

    On some stanzas you rthyme, but on others you don't so its kind of hard to keep the beat alive ...
    So you should stick to one form ..

    made me cry, beautifully written :(

    P.S - returning the favour

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Its really good!

    Beautifully written, I loved it!

    Thanks for commenting my poem by the way!

    I'm going to read more of yours now!

  • 18 years ago

    by Broken Dreams

    Wow...thats the kind of poem that leaves u speechless!!!! excellent job on it!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShatteredGirl

    Wow that was a really good poem... it was sad but excellent.. keep it up =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    It was actually good, I can't believe I liked it. Usually I don't like stuff about suicide and all... but this ones pretty good. 5 alll the way.

    (comment and rate mine if you want. hint hint. =P)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    Wow that poem was really good, it was a sad subject but you did well :)
    5/5 for that :)

    x x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by wish123

    Wow thats really good! everything flowed so well and all! your really good at poems!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tenchima

    Nice poem...really deep

  • 17 years ago

    by wish123

    Wow this poem is AMAZING!!! its so deep and its just one of your best i Love it!!! wow...so deep...keep up the awesome work, but you havent had any new ones lately, so hurry cuz i would love to read some more!!!