I really lyk it...it captures the emotions...beautiful

I love it .. very nice it was deep ... i love it thou my favorite!

No...I dont think its horrible. I actually like it. there was one verse that kinda flowed weird. but I really did like it.

I loved it...you should chech out my poem. its called i cut. i think ull like it....or i hope u like it lol!

Its not horrible i lie it... did u make this when ur love crushed ur heart and u used the wrong kind of break

Hmmm sad..but a great way to express feeling

Hmmm sad..but a great way to express feeling

Its great, again reminds me of my own life keep up the great work

Call you to say
thanks and goodbye
i am leaving rite now
i will not cry

thats my fav part....it really echoes how i have felt.....i love the way ur peoms really have so much emotion in them....excellent job once again!!

Its not horrible at all its totally deep! ----keep up the good work!---