Hey... thats a pretty intense poem. i think i semi know how you feel.. great poem though. amazing choice of words. keep it up
dee

I remeber this poem
i was the first person you told it to.
well i noticed you added some adjustments.well i still love it

jason hernandez

This one is even better then the last one. I love your work heaps.

I love your poems so much, they're awesome especially this one!