by Poison Ivy Jul 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I say I love you, |
by Amberinaa
Hello, It was pretty good. I like the whole idea behind it and the message coming through. Some of the ryhmes seemed forced tho and at some points didn't rhyme. change:game?? Im not seeing it. Anywho I'd give you a 4 for it! Keep writing i hope to read more. |